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+Overall post on “Breakfast in New York”
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+:date: 2021-04-14T11:21:04
+:category: faith
+:tags: review, harryPotter, blogComment
+
+(cover letter for presenting my reviews of “`Breakfast in New
+York`_” by Radaslab; `the first post`_ and `the second post`_)
+
+I was rereading again “`Breakfast in New York`_” by Radaslab and
+I don’t know for certain why it aggravates me so much. Certainly
+there is the conflict between generally good and original plot
+and tiring execution. The plot seems to be not completely
+overused (at least in the HP-fanfiction universe) and it has
+a potential to be rather nice romcom story. Of course, when
+“romance”, “breakfast”, and “New York” are used together, one has
+tendency to think about different breakfast_, but even that gives
+the start of the story nice feeling of expectations. It is setup
+for nice we-lost-each-other-and-now-we-found-us story (“When
+Harry Met Sally”? Something of that sort), but it just broke down
+on execution. I wrote two posts about it already:
+
+* `the first post`_ or how to be brief and how not to write
+  a Christian in your story
+
+* `the second post`_ or how not to valiantly defeat a purpose of
+  every story (also see this `explanation on the key character
+  flaw`_).
+
+.. _`Breakfast in New York`:
+   https://www.fanfiction.net/s/5141159
+
+.. _breakfast:
+   https://youtu.be/1JfS90u-1g8
+
+.. _`the first post`:
+   {filename}breakfast_in_new_york.rst
+
+.. _`the second post`:
+   {filename}breakfast_in_new_york_02.rst
+
+.. _`explanation on the key character flaw`:
+   https://youtu.be/8aprQXvWRXU