From 973d6fee5369017f4d7a69c8f69ee039293329a5 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Matěj Cepl Date: Wed, 14 Apr 2021 22:32:28 +0200 Subject: One more on Breakfast in NYC --- faith/breakfast_in_new_york_03.rst | 44 ++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++ 1 file changed, 44 insertions(+) create mode 100644 faith/breakfast_in_new_york_03.rst (limited to 'faith/breakfast_in_new_york_03.rst') diff --git a/faith/breakfast_in_new_york_03.rst b/faith/breakfast_in_new_york_03.rst new file mode 100644 index 0000000..92fb58d --- /dev/null +++ b/faith/breakfast_in_new_york_03.rst @@ -0,0 +1,44 @@ +Overall post on “Breakfast in New York” +####################################### + +:date: 2021-04-14T11:21:04 +:category: faith +:tags: review, harryPotter, blogComment + +(cover letter for presenting my reviews of “`Breakfast in New +York`_” by Radaslab; `the first post`_ and `the second post`_) + +I was rereading again “`Breakfast in New York`_” by Radaslab and +I don’t know for certain why it aggravates me so much. Certainly +there is the conflict between generally good and original plot +and tiring execution. The plot seems to be not completely +overused (at least in the HP-fanfiction universe) and it has +a potential to be rather nice romcom story. Of course, when +“romance”, “breakfast”, and “New York” are used together, one has +tendency to think about different breakfast_, but even that gives +the start of the story nice feeling of expectations. It is setup +for nice we-lost-each-other-and-now-we-found-us story (“When +Harry Met Sally”? Something of that sort), but it just broke down +on execution. I wrote two posts about it already: + +* `the first post`_ or how to be brief and how not to write + a Christian in your story + +* `the second post`_ or how not to valiantly defeat a purpose of + every story (also see this `explanation on the key character + flaw`_). + +.. _`Breakfast in New York`: + https://www.fanfiction.net/s/5141159 + +.. _breakfast: + https://youtu.be/1JfS90u-1g8 + +.. _`the first post`: + {filename}breakfast_in_new_york.rst + +.. _`the second post`: + {filename}breakfast_in_new_york_02.rst + +.. _`explanation on the key character flaw`: + https://youtu.be/8aprQXvWRXU -- cgit