Fix Firefox OS post-mortem post.

1 files changed, 8 insertions, 6 deletions

diff --git a/firefoxOS_post-mortem.rst b/firefoxOS_post-mortem.rst
index f9d2918..c86a6a4 100644
--- a/firefoxOS_post-mortem.rst
+++ b/firefoxOS_post-mortem.rst
@@ -68,11 +68,13 @@ development on this front, but it has still `not be done`_ yet
 Calendar works quite nicely with CalDAV (and with my ownCloud
 instance). However, I would expect that in the same manner the
 Contacts app works with CardDAV. After all adding new contacts
-and appointments [#]_ It doesn’t, `at all`_ I know there are
-some attempts to create a general JavaScript `DAV library`_, but
-nothing substantial came from that yet, and the library itself
-was still somehow broken, so even when I started to extend some
-ToDoMVC app myself I was not able to make the library working.
+and appointments [#]_ is one of the most common activits done
+with a smartphone. It doesn’t sync with anything `at all`_.
+I know there are some attempts to create a general JavaScript
+`DAV library`_, but nothing substantial came from that yet, and
+the library itself was still somehow broken, so even when I
+started to extend some ToDoMVC app myself I was not able to make
+the library working.
 
 .. _`at all`:
     https://bugzilla.mozilla.org/show_bug.cgi?id=859306
@@ -84,7 +86,7 @@ Next is the camera. Technically it `should be`_ 5MP so not a
 complete disaster, and truth to be told that I got many very nice
 pictures from it. However, it is completely unreliable. We were
 in Dresden, visiting the awesome Zwinger_, it was an extremely
-hot and sunny day of typical of the past summer, and yet all my
+hot and sunny day so typical of the past summer, and yet all my
 photos of the Zinger itself ended as a complete blue disaster.
 And it is by far not the only case when something like that
 happened. With Flame as a camera I was never really sure what