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diff --git a/faith/augurey.rst b/faith/augurey.rst index 1a70bc8..21e079f 100644 --- a/faith/augurey.rst +++ b/faith/augurey.rst @@ -2,6 +2,7 @@ Augurey or loosing of sanity ############################ :date: 2019-08-28T16:51:33 +:modified: 2020-04-13T11:18:25 :category: faith :tags: review, harryPotter, blogComment, fromReddit @@ -78,6 +79,65 @@ care of orphans. However, the author was lazy and he just wanted to to get to the Harmony cooing over small baby as easily as possible, so he went straight ahead. Grrr. +---- + +**[added on 2020-04-13]** + +However, I still cannot get rid of the basic premise of this +story, because I truly believe this is so good idea. It is just +such pity that the execution was so horrible. So, let me suggest +this as a prompt for somebody to write it better (in the same +manner the author of “`The Accidental Animagus`_” admitted_ that +it was based on the idea from “`The Natural Animagus by +wsbenge`_”). + +The start of the story could be exactly the same: The Trio in the +Grimmauld Place found on the Black Family tapestry, that +Bellatrix has a daughter with Tom Riddle. Then switch to the +moment immediately after the Battle of Hogwarts and you can +switch to search for the lost baby, which could make a foundation +for a good plot (although not very long one). I could happily +envision it as something similar to “`Hunters and Prey by +Northumbrian`_”: first large case of young Trainee Auror Harry +Potter. This one could be probably even better than that one +because you don’t have to play in rather unrealistic hidden +werewolf village, but in the real world with realistically +crushed but bitter and hateful former Death Eaters and pureblood +supremacists. And it is even more fun because the whole +investigation is done amongst them, but they cannot have even +a shadow of suspicion of who that lost girl truly is. + +Then you can have the next part of taking care of an abused +orphan, and Harry with his past would be very interested in +caring for orphans (an idea which seems to be very +underdeveloped, the only exception I can think of is “`Inner +Demons by serendipity_50`_” and also the brilliant “`Dudley's +Memories`_” and “`Snape’s Memories`_” by paganaidd). I generally +don’t care about the shipping of Harry in all this, I don’t think +it matters that much for the story, just if you want to break up +Harry and Ginny, PLEASE, do a better job than the crazy author of +this story. + +Of course, the premise of the story is based on the idea that Tom +Riddle could father a baby in the first place. Yes, I don’t +believe this story (and the Cursed Child, one of many disasters +of that fanfiction story), that he would be capable of falling in +love with anybody, and I have deep suspicion even about his +ability to commit the deed. After all, he truly doesn’t have the +human body, what he has is the alchemist construct, created by +two sexually rather inept most likely still virgins; I wonder +whether his body truly has all bits in the right places. Much +more appealing (or much disgusting, that’s the same thing) would +be if Delphini was either just by-product of some dark magic +ritual (which would nicely lead to her being neglected and +abandoned), or even intended object (produced by artificial +insemination or its dark magical equivalent) of some ritual. What +about the ultimate Horcrux created by sacrificing your own child? +It would be an opportunity to create truly disgusting dark magic, +which would eliminate all those jabbers about grey magic and +acceptability of the Dark Magic. + + .. _`The Augurey`: https://www.fanfiction.net/s/12310861/1/ @@ -91,7 +151,28 @@ possible, so he went straight ahead. Grrr. https://www.fanfiction.net/s/11916243/1/ .. _review: - {filename}singularoddities-review-escape.rst + {filename}singularoddities-review-escape.rst .. _`Late Morning Talks`: - https://archiveofourown.org/works/20141410 + https://archiveofourown.org/works/20141410 + +.. _`The Accidental Animagus`: + https://archiveofourown.org/works/14078862 + +.. _admitted: + https://potterficweekly.com/archives/1813 + +.. _`The Natural Animagus by wsbenge`: + https://www.fanfiction.net/s/4183350 + +.. _`Hunters and Prey by Northumbrian`: + https://archiveofourown.org/works/1857084 + +.. _`Inner Demons by serendipity_50`: + https://archiveofourown.org/works/601124 + +.. _`Dudley's Memories`: + https://www.fanfiction.net/s/6142629 + +.. _`Snape’s Memories`: + https://www.fanfiction.net/s/6329597 |