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@@ -60,7 +60,7 @@ women and yet he must pretend to be one to overcome this flaw,
Holly Golightly in “`Breakfast at Tiffany’s`_” must step out of
her cynicism which builds a cage around her heart to find her
true love (and cat), and so on and so forth. That is exactly my
-biggest problems_ with most Harmony stories: their protagonists
+biggest problem_ with most Harmony stories: their protagonists
are just too perfect, they don’t have any flaws, and they don’t
need any development.
@@ -77,7 +77,8 @@ capable of real life. And the question is, how come these good
people, how come we, sometimes do really stupid things? Why would
a good Catholic girl sleep with a boy on a one-night stand while
leaving to the other end of the world (and she thinks
-permanently)? Why would he? What would they do afterwards?
+permanently)? Why would he? What would they do afterwards, when
+the baby happens?
Where good people do bad things (think Graham Greene, if you want
to have a good Catholic writer) is exactly the place where
@@ -95,23 +96,23 @@ them to it.
So, why would not-that-girl do that? Another pair of completely
perfect boring people in all Harmony stories are her parents.
They are always supportive, always accepting, always perfect (in
-sharp contract to Dursleys, who are not). When we stop pretending
-that all good guys are completely perfect, we can see that most
-of them have some obvious flaws. So, for example, the explanation
-of many problems in Hermione’s actions could be explained by her
-parents. If Hermione was a daughter of two perfectionist
-overachievers, working hard was her only reaction to her guilt.
-So, when she lies to her parents about her second year, she
-drives herself to a breakdown in her third one. And when she is
-overcome by stress, loneliness, guilt (she did effectively
-enslave her parents, she, a founder of S.P.E.W.!), unfulfilled
-desire, and perhaps a bit of wine (of course, Catholics must
-drink wine, not Scotch!) and sleeps with Harry, when she finds
-later she is pregnant out of wedlock, she does the same: being
-the overachiever, perfect student, perfect single mother (and by
-God’s grace, she actually is). Fortunately, she is Hermione
-Granger, so she has the brain to back up this drive, and she
-manages to work it out.
+sharp contract to Dursleys, who are not), always enabling_. When
+we stop pretending that all good guys are completely perfect, we
+can see that most of them have some obvious flaws. So, for
+example, the explanation of many problems in Hermione’s actions
+could be explained by her parents. If Hermione was a daughter of
+two perfectionist overachievers, working hard was her only
+reaction to her guilt. So, when she lies to her parents about her
+second year, she drives herself to a breakdown in her third one.
+And when she is overcome by stress, loneliness, guilt (she did
+effectively enslave her parents, she, a founder of S.P.E.W.!),
+unfulfilled desire, and perhaps a bit of wine (of course,
+Catholics must drink wine, not Scotch!) and sleeps with Harry,
+when she finds later she is pregnant out of wedlock, she does the
+same: being the overachiever, perfect student, perfect single
+mother (and by God’s grace, she actually is). Fortunately, she is
+Hermione Granger, so she has the brain to back up this drive, and
+she manages to pull it off.
Perhaps, you have another explanation, but anything is better
than the Eros Syndrome.
@@ -125,7 +126,7 @@ than the Eros Syndrome.
.. _`one of her interviews`:
https://youtu.be/8aprQXvWRXU
-.. _problems:
+.. _problem:
{filename}one-more-anti-harmony.rst
.. _`from point A to point B`:
@@ -136,3 +137,6 @@ than the Eros Syndrome.
.. _`Breakfast at Tiffany’s`:
https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Breakfast_at_Tiffany%27s_(film)
+
+.. _enabling:
+ {filename}singularoddities-review-escape.rst