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author | Matěj Cepl <mcepl@cepl.eu> | 2021-02-11 20:16:46 +0100 |
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committer | Matěj Cepl <mcepl@cepl.eu> | 2021-02-11 20:16:46 +0100 |
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New post "Preaching The Message"
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diff --git a/faith/preaching_the_message.rst b/faith/preaching_the_message.rst new file mode 100644 index 0000000..3d013ee --- /dev/null +++ b/faith/preaching_the_message.rst @@ -0,0 +1,84 @@ +How not to use your character as a mouthpiece +############################################# + +:date: 2021-02-11T09:27:17 +:category: faith +:tags: harryPotter, blogComment + +(my contribution on the thread “`Using your character as a mouth +piece`_” by Snoo) + +If you are interested in the theory of writing, then I have to +suggest to you two very obscure and old books (yes, old books are +quite often better than the new ones): “`The Mind of the Maker`_” +by Dorothy L. Sayers (yes, the author of detective stories with +Lord Peter Wimsey, so she knew one or two things about writing) +and “`How Not to Write a Play`_” by Walter Kerr (he was the chief +theatre critic of The New York Times long time ago). The first +one is probably very hard to digest for some (it uses the analogy +with the Trinitarian Theology), so let me summarize what I mean: + +Every story should be about `how the hero got from A to B`_: how +a young abused orphaned boy found his way to find peaceful and +loving life while defeating the worst wizard of his times; how +the young Danish prince found the courage to revenge the murder +of his own father; how a boy and a girl from two families which +hated each other found love and finally were killed by that +hatred. There are some requirements for the good story +I described in the linked blog post (using the Kerr’s theory; +namely, it shouldn’t skip the story itself as many fanfics do), +but there is also more: the hero has to get there on his/her own, +the author cannot pull him there against his will and powers. +That’s the clear sign of problems with writing, when suddenly +`characters start to behave like an idiots just to keep the plot +together`_: all characters have to get from A to B because of +their own decision, ruled by their own decisions, not because the +author needs to make them these decisions. + +Subset of this problem is when not only heroes of a story behave +out of their character, but even worse when their behaviour is +driven by the author’s opinions more than by their intrinsic +decisions. Juliet is not in love with Romeo because she would be +in love with him, but because she needs to show how it is bad to +marry as a teenager (and thus making bad decisions, as teenagers +do); Hamlet doesn’t struggle with his path to kill the ruling +king, because of moral problems, but because he wants to preach +to us how his mother is just a tool in the misogynistic world. +And yes, somebody mentioned “`Atlas Shrugged`_” by Ayn Rand, +which is an horrible example of the sermon on extreme +individualism pretending to be a novel. Or even worse, when in +every other Indy!Harry story, a reader suspects his not behaving +out of his own heart, but because the author wants him to preach +the author’s relational problems with his father (while shouting +at Dumbledore). + +And yes, every books has a message, but see for example +“`Fahrenheit 451`_” by Ray Bradbury (one of the best short novels +of all times, I believe). It has a message as well, but first it +is rather complicated to say what the message really is and to be +honest to the story. More importantly though, heroes of the story +never shout out the message to us (actually, the main hero of the +story works most of the time professionally against the message), +you are just lead to find it on your own. + +.. _`Using your character as a mouth piece`: + https://www.reddit.com/r/HPfanfiction/comments/lha0ag/using_your_character_as_a_mouth_piece/?utm_source=share&utm_medium=web2x&context=3 + +.. _`The Mind of the Maker`: + https://www.fadedpage.com/showbook.php?pid=20140909 + +.. _`How Not to Write a Play`: + https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/How_Not_to_Write_a_Play + +.. _`how the hero got from A to B`: + https://matej.ceplovi.cz/blog/whats-wrong-with-ginny.html + +.. _`characters start to behave like an idiots just to keep the plot together`: + https://matej.ceplovi.cz/blog/augurey-or-loosing-of-sanity.html + +.. _`Atlas Shrugged`: + https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Atlas_Shrugged + +.. _`Fahrenheit 451`: + https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Fahrenheit_451 + |