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diff --git a/faith/intro-to-femHarry.rst b/faith/intro-to-femHarry.rst
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--- a/faith/intro-to-femHarry.rst
+++ b/faith/intro-to-femHarry.rst
@@ -12,9 +12,9 @@ Cepl’s Introduction to fem!Harrys
 
 There are two types of fem!Harry stories:
 
-1. Where Harry (with different name, of course) is naturally
+1. Where Harry (with a different name, of course) is naturally
    a girl, always was and always will be. Usually, I guess, the
-   motivation is that the author is a woman and she feels
+   motivation is that the author is a woman, and she feels
    uncomfortable writing from the male point of view (I know
    something about that, somehow, without me wanting it, most of
    my stories have a female protagonist, and it is really hard).
@@ -32,14 +32,17 @@ There are two types of fem!Harry stories:
    turned to a girl (or he was born as a girl and then his sex
    was magically hidden and now he/she turns back into his
    natural state). There are many wrong reasons why somebody
-   could write such story. First of all, and I am afraid it
-   applies to most of them, the author wanted to write a lemon
-   and femslash was more juicy for (I guess, usually) him. One
-   unashamedly so is IMHO `11396276`_ and I will leave it at
-   that. The second is that they are Snape/Draco fans and they
-   didn’t want to write a slash story, so they turned Harry into
-   a girl to suite them better to their planned pairing. One
-   classical example would be `Snape's Daughter by Tribi`_ with
+   could write such a story. First, and I am afraid it applies to
+   most of them, the author wanted to write a lemon and femslash
+   was juicier for (I guess, usually) him. One unashamedly so is
+   IMHO `11396276`_ and I will leave it at that. Or there is
+   non-smutty, just fun, variant in `Pranking The Tournament by
+   Gardevoir687`_.
+   
+   The second is that they are Snape/Draco fans and they didn’t
+   want to write a slash story, so they turned Harry into a girl
+   to suit them better to their planned pairing. One classical
+   example would be `Snape's Daughter by Tribi`_ with the
    unbelievably horrible choice of name for the main protagonist
    (I won’t even write it here). I am not a big fan of either
    Snape or Draco, so when the story turned to be Drarry, I quit,
@@ -49,26 +52,29 @@ There are two types of fem!Harry stories:
    it suffers from the deluge of smut (including some of the most
    obnoxious tropes like magical-hormone-makes-you-horny), but if
    you skip that, there is a rather good story hidden beneath it.
-   Alternative to that “something weird happened” is `A Fair Life
-   by Rtnwriter`_, where it is Harry (the canonical male one)’s
-   death in the Forbidden Forest in the end of DH and returning
-   back as a girl on the eve of the announcement of champions for
-   the Triwizard tournament and it is so far rather decently
-   written Hermione/Harry femslash (not even too smutty). Similar
-   idea with different execution is `A Different Perspective by
-   StellaStarMagic`_, where the canonical Harry jumps after
-   Sirius into the Veil in the Death Chamber of the Department of
-   Mysteries, but he is kicked back by rather Pratchettish Death
-   into being a twin-sister of more or less canonical Harry
-   Potter just before the letters from Hogwarts are delivered to
-   them. She is sorted as a Hufflepuff, and it develops into
-   so-far interesting timeline repair story. Usually the sticky
-   part of gender bender stories is treatment of unease of the
-   former Harry with him being a female suddenly with all bits in
-   wrong places. One example of rather anxious treatment of the
-   situation is `To Reach Without by inwardtransience`_ which
-   turns into rather interesting pairing of Harry/Susan Bones,
-   but again further the development, more weird it becomes.
+   
+   An alternative to that “something weird happened” is `A Fair
+   Life by Rtnwriter`_, where it is Harry (the canonical male
+   one)’s death in the Forbidden Forest at the end of DH and
+   returning as a girl on the eve of the announcement of
+   champions for the Triwizard tournament and it is so far rather
+   decently written Hermione/Harry femslash (not even too
+   smutty). Similar idea with different execution is `A Different
+   Perspective by StellaStarMagic`_, where the canonical Harry
+   jumps after Sirius into the Veil in the Death Chamber of the
+   Department of Mysteries, but he is kicked back by rather
+   Pratchettish Death into being a twin-sister of more or less
+   canonical Harry Potter just before the letters from Hogwarts
+   are delivered to them. She is sorted as a Hufflepuff, and it
+   develops into so-far interesting timeline repair story.
+   
+   Usually, the sticky part of gender bender stories is the
+   treatment of unease of the former Harry with him being
+   a female suddenly with all bits in wrong places. One example
+   of rather anxious treatment of the situation is `To Reach
+   Without by inwardtransience`_ which turns into the rather
+   interesting pairing of Harry/Susan Bones, but again further
+   the development, weirder it becomes.
 
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@@ -87,6 +93,9 @@ There are two types of fem!Harry stories:
 .. _`11396276`:
     https://www.fanfiction.net/s/11396276/1/
 
+.. _`Pranking The Tournament by Gardevoir687`:
+    https://www.fanfiction.net/s/13132217
+
 .. _`Snape's Daughter by Tribi`:
     https://www.fanfiction.net/s/7618752/1/