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author | Matěj Cepl <mcepl@cepl.eu> | 2023-08-29 11:33:49 +0200 |
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committer | Matěj Cepl <mcepl@cepl.eu> | 2023-08-29 11:41:14 +0200 |
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diff --git a/faith/breakfast_in_new_york_03.rst b/faith/breakfast_in_new_york_03.rst deleted file mode 100644 index 92fb58d..0000000 --- a/faith/breakfast_in_new_york_03.rst +++ /dev/null @@ -1,44 +0,0 @@ -Overall post on “Breakfast in New York” -####################################### - -:date: 2021-04-14T11:21:04 -:category: faith -:tags: review, harryPotter, blogComment - -(cover letter for presenting my reviews of “`Breakfast in New -York`_” by Radaslab; `the first post`_ and `the second post`_) - -I was rereading again “`Breakfast in New York`_” by Radaslab and -I don’t know for certain why it aggravates me so much. Certainly -there is the conflict between generally good and original plot -and tiring execution. The plot seems to be not completely -overused (at least in the HP-fanfiction universe) and it has -a potential to be rather nice romcom story. Of course, when -“romance”, “breakfast”, and “New York” are used together, one has -tendency to think about different breakfast_, but even that gives -the start of the story nice feeling of expectations. It is setup -for nice we-lost-each-other-and-now-we-found-us story (“When -Harry Met Sally”? Something of that sort), but it just broke down -on execution. I wrote two posts about it already: - -* `the first post`_ or how to be brief and how not to write - a Christian in your story - -* `the second post`_ or how not to valiantly defeat a purpose of - every story (also see this `explanation on the key character - flaw`_). - -.. _`Breakfast in New York`: - https://www.fanfiction.net/s/5141159 - -.. _breakfast: - https://youtu.be/1JfS90u-1g8 - -.. _`the first post`: - {filename}breakfast_in_new_york.rst - -.. _`the second post`: - {filename}breakfast_in_new_york_02.rst - -.. _`explanation on the key character flaw`: - https://youtu.be/8aprQXvWRXU |