Fix some typos.

1 files changed, 4 insertions, 4 deletions

diff --git a/faith/breakfast_in_new_york.rst b/faith/breakfast_in_new_york.rst
index 74a386c..a29aee4 100644
--- a/faith/breakfast_in_new_york.rst
+++ b/faith/breakfast_in_new_york.rst
@@ -16,7 +16,7 @@ have thirty-one of them. If you write two-hundred thousand words
 long story, there is always good testing question “Do I have
 a plot as strong as `Moby Dick by Herman Melville`_, do I have
 the same amount of action?” [#]_ OK, romance can have less
-adventure than Moby Dick, but this story with this incredible
+adventure than Moby Dick, but this story with its incredibly
 repetitive nature (where even Hermione gets so bored, she
 obviously forgot Harry has already told her he was Roman-Catholic
 and they would have a wedding ordained by his parish priest even
@@ -33,9 +33,9 @@ However, as I have described elsewhere_, lack of editing is
 completely normal in the fanfiction world, and I wouldn’t write
 this review just because of that. In the `religionless universe
 of Harry Potter`_, I am very thankful for every even hint of some
-person who is a Christian and takes her belief seriously.
-However, then are stories like this one and `Strong Blood by
-CooLibrarian`_, which are just confusing. Main characters (and
+person who is a Christian, and who takes her belief seriously.
+However, then there are stories like this one and `Strong Blood
+by CooLibrarian`_, which are just confusing. Main characters (and
 many other people) are Christians (here Roman Catholics, in
 “Strong Blood” Russian Orthodox), but there is absolutely nothing
 Christian about them. They never pray, never go to the church,