Finish Anti-harmony

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diff --git a/.gitignore b/.gitignore
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-Aleš*
diff --git a/faith/anti-harmony.rst b/faith/anti-harmony.rst
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--- a/faith/anti-harmony.rst
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@@ -2,7 +2,6 @@ Anti-Harmony or Notebooks and Letters
 #####################################
 
 :date: 2019-06-15T18:17:42
-:status: draft
 :category: faith
 :tags: review, harryPotter, blogComment
 
@@ -41,8 +40,19 @@ Malfoy, Bellatrix Lestrange, Antonin Dolohov, are killed by few Dumbledore Army
 members including naked Hermione (naked because she was going to be raped) and
 Harry).
 
-And yet. Harmonian traits of the story killed it for me. Of course, bashing.
-Actually, it is not that terrible
+And yet. Harmonian traits of the story killed it for me. Bashing
+is actually not that terrible, but general blandness of their
+relationship persists.
+
+Actually, it was not just Harmony that killed it. It was sticking
+two mostly unrelated stories together which made it even worse.
+I won’t get into details, but after the main story (more or less
+standard Harmony, slightly better than others) there is suddenly
+completely new unrelated post-war tragic story pasted to it,
+which has no point other than to pull some tears from the reader.
+
+I don’t know whether to recommend this story or not. Probably
+just for really hard core Harmony lovers.
 
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     {filename}singularoddities-review-escape.rst