Improve wording of introduction text

1 files changed, 6 insertions, 7 deletions

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@@ -4,10 +4,9 @@ toc: false
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 <p>
-  <strong>Welcome to sourcehut!</strong> You can access each of the main
-  services from the links in the navigation at the top of the site. You're
-  currently on man.sr.ht, which hosts the user manual and provides wikis for
-  projects hosted here.
+  <strong>Welcome to sourcehut!</strong> You can access each of your services
+  from the links in the navigation at the top of the site. You're currently on
+  man.sr.ht, which provides the user manual and hosts wikis for your projects.
 </p>
 <style>
 dt {
@@ -73,7 +72,7 @@ dt {
   Want to keep up with the latest news on sr.ht? A monthly "what's cooking" is
   posted to the
   <a href="https://lists.sr.ht/~sircmpwn/sr.ht-announce"
-  >sr.ht-announce</a> list. Be sure to subscribe!
+  >sr.ht-announce</a> list. Consider subscribing!
 </p>
 <h3 id="service-documentation">Service Documentation</h3>
 <dl class="row">
@@ -156,8 +155,8 @@ dt {
 </dl>
 <h3 id="secondary-services">Secondary services</h3>
 <p>
-  The services shown above are the "primary" services offered by sr.ht. A few,
-  smaller services are additionally offered.
+  The services shown above are the primary services offered by sr.ht. Some
+  secondary services are also available.
 </p>
 <dl class="row">
   <div class="col-md-4">