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 <h1>Sos Project Home</h1>
 
-The SOS project (and package) is intended to:
+The SOS project provides tools for gathering information and running 
 
 <ul>
 <li>Improve on the capabilities of sysreport by adding some analytic abilities</li>
-<li>To put more tools into the customer's hands to allow them to solve their problems</li>
-<li>To provide a set of tools to improve the abilities of Red Hat support to solve customer problems</li>
-<li>To reduce the number of contacts required with the customer to solve their problems</li>
+<li>Allow applications to deliver modules that integrate with sos to gather support information</li>
+<li>To put more tools into administrator's hands to help them solve their problems</li>
+<li>To provide a set of tools to improve the abilities of support organizations to solve customer problems</li>
 </ul>
 
-<p>There will be links to mailing lists and repos here</p>
 
-<p>Although this project was begun by Red Hat employees, it is released under the GPL
+<p>Although this project was begun by people in Red Hat's support organization, it is released under the GPL
 , with all Red Hat specific parts isolated in plugins so that it will be generally useful to others.</p>
 
-<p>The first stage of the project, sosreport, has a first implementation, and is available FILL IN WHERE</p>:
+<p>Contributors to this project are welcome, especially if you are interested in writing plugins or in helping
+make this tool useful across many linux distributions. All development and testing to date has occurred on
+Fedora Core 5, and contributors working with other distributions are welcome.
+
+<p>The first stage of the project, sosreport, has a first implementation, and is available now.
+If you maintain linux software, please consider delivering a plugin for sos that will gather the information
+needed to help troubleshoot or debug your application.</p>:
 
 This project will provide a number of tools, in the following areas:
 
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 with the system information and problem description attached will be handled by policy plugins
 that can be customized for integration with different CRM systems.</p>
 
-<hr>
-
-<h1> List of current requirements</h1>
-
-<p>TBD</p>
-Here are the sos requirements as they stand:
 
 <hr>
 <i>sos is the international distress call, and also stands for &quot;son of sysreport&quot;</i>